In Tuesday's class, we had a small writing session to get us started on our introduction to the Research Project. I started my introduction below before I got advice on other ways to start an introduction. This is a raw copy before editing. I put a smile on my face, and I’m always full of energy. I have three beautiful children. I travel every year a least four times. I drive a newer car, own my home, and have a good job. Life is good on the outside looking in. My friend thinks I'm so happy because I have all these things. Ture is told, I’m happy because all the struggles I endured in my life. At one point in time, I was homeless and unemployed all while raising two children at that time. I still put a smile on my face. I never changed because my bad times made my good times possible. Every day is not promised to us, so taking three good things that happen in a day was not hard for me too. I was able to see and appreciate the little things that made me happy in one day. I think everyone could benefit from the writing down three good things they appreciated about their day.
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Sabatino
11/21/2018 07:52:34 am
I see how this opening anecdote could grab reader attention and transition into a thesis statement. I look forward to seeing other rhetorical choices you make to compose draft #1.
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